I heard . . . the birds singing nice and slowly through the colorful trees.
I saw . . . the small peddles flowing slowly with the river.
I wondered . . . if the day was going to be nice, warm and cozy.
I felt . . . the beats of the music shiver down my spine.
What was your favorite part of my holiday story? And why?
Kia ora. I am Rylee from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you wrote your story with the 4 senses.
I learnt that you wondered if the day would be nice warm and cozy.
I was wondering how many sense stories that you have written this year.
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Mā te wā
Rylee